Time
Runs perennially
Condensed efforts, Still
Can’t be a precursor
Futile.
Conscience
Sustains Perseverance
Precursor to Time
Makes our own destiny
Eureka.
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Written for : David’s W3 Prompt #54: Wea’ve Written Weekly
Sadje’s prompt guidelines– Write an ‘elfchen’ poem;
Extra challenge: write a second ‘elfchen’ poem, which opposes the first one.
https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/05/10/w3-prompt-54-weave-written-weekly/
In response to; dVerse- Slipping into surrealism with Erik Johansson, hosted by Mish
Good evening and see you next time.
Darn, J. M.❣️
I love this… So good 🙂
BTW, please don’t forget to share the URL to this post on Mister Linky ~ otherwise the other participants will never come across it!
Much love,
David
Oh! My sincere thanks, David. Yes, I would. Thanks yet again.
Hi, J. M. <3
Just wanna let you know that this week's W3 prompt, hosted by our beloved Punam, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/05/17/w3-prompt-55-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
Nice work, JM. A pat on the back to you. David doesn’t just co-write with anyone. Well done!
My sincere thanks for your encouraging comments.
This is excellent take JM. Very profound and thought provoking
My sincere thanks, Sadje ji.
You’re most welcome
time neither yours nor mine
is almost never fine
too fast or slow
just so
Thought-provoking indeed. The conciseness of the Elfchen drives the messages home.
My sincere thanks pl.
Eureka indeed – well done 🙌
Heartily thanks indeed.
such profound thoughts. Leaves us with much to think about…
… and if we can align our mindsets to your words… eureka😁
stunning take as always, J🤍🤗
Absolutely. Sincere thanks always, D..
always a pleasure 🤍🙏
I love the last line especially!
Many thanks, so very kind of you.
Love this J 😄 Making our own destiny is the better way.
My sincere thanks always, A…
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Very well constructed and concise poem!
Sincere thanks and regards.
Wonderfully done!
Sincere thanks pl.
You are welcome.
Simple and very profound. Time can be an enemy or a friend. Well done.
Sincere thanks pl.