(Un)Timely Yours

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Time

Runs perennially

Condensed efforts, Still

Can’t be a precursor

Futile.

 

Conscience

Sustains Perseverance

Precursor to Time

Makes our own destiny

Eureka.

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Written for : David’s W3 Prompt #54: Wea’ve Written Weekly

Sadje’s prompt guidelines–  Write an ‘elfchen’ poem;

Extra challenge: write a second ‘elfchen’ poem, which opposes the first one.

https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/05/10/w3-prompt-54-weave-written-weekly/

In response to; dVerse- Slipping into surrealism with Erik Johansson, hosted by Mish

Good evening and see you next time. 

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29 thoughts on “(Un)Timely Yours”

  1. ben Alexander – David Bogomolny was born in Jerusalem to parents who made Aliyah from the USSR in the mid-70's. He grew up in America, and returned to Israel as an adult. He works as a grant writer for the Jewish Agency for Israel. He and his wife and daughter live in Jerusalem.
    ben Alexander says:

    Darn, J. M.❣️
    I love this… So good 🙂

    BTW, please don’t forget to share the URL to this post on Mister Linky ~ otherwise the other participants will never come across it!

    Much love,
    David

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      1. ben Alexander – David Bogomolny was born in Jerusalem to parents who made Aliyah from the USSR in the mid-70's. He grew up in America, and returned to Israel as an adult. He works as a grant writer for the Jewish Agency for Israel. He and his wife and daughter live in Jerusalem.
        ben Alexander says:

        Hi, J. M. <3

        Just wanna let you know that this week's W3 prompt, hosted by our beloved Punam, is now live:

        https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/05/17/w3-prompt-55-weave-written-weekly/

        Enjoy!

        Much love,
        David

  2. schingle – Though I have many interests, writing is my passion. I love music, sports, various puzzles that require thinking, women (and other human beings), dogs and my son. Probably other things too. But, more than anything, writing is my passion.
    schingle says:

    Nice work, JM. A pat on the back to you. David doesn’t just co-write with anyone. Well done!

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  3. Sadje – I am writing to express my opinion, share my experiences and to maybe provide some insight. My blog is addressing women at 50 ( but men are welcome to read my posts) ,their issues and the questions that come up at this stage in life. I don’t aim to teach, but to learn together.
    Sadje says:

    This is excellent take JM. Very profound and thought provoking

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      1. Sadje – I am writing to express my opinion, share my experiences and to maybe provide some insight. My blog is addressing women at 50 ( but men are welcome to read my posts) ,their issues and the questions that come up at this stage in life. I don’t aim to teach, but to learn together.
        Sadje says:

        You’re most welcome

  6. Eureka indeed – well done 🙌

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  7. such profound thoughts. Leaves us with much to think about…
    … and if we can align our mindsets to your words… eureka😁
    stunning take as always, J🤍🤗

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  9. Aboli Mane – Poet. Writer. Blogger. I post short reads, and poetry on A Writer In The Room. I published my debut poetry book "An Aster's Solitude" in 2019. Currently: Keeping this blog afloat. I write flash fiction and poetry on various writing prompts.
    Aboli Mane says:

    Love this J 😄 Making our own destiny is the better way.

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  13. Simple and very profound. Time can be an enemy or a friend. Well done.

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