Hypothetically Yours

Written for : Sadje’s What do you see # 183 #Keepitalive #Whatdoyousee #WDYS

For the first time, I dare participate in Sadje’s popular series and hope she does allow me for the same.

I have four different sets of four lines each pertaining to the Girl’s andΒ  supposedly the boy’s ( not in the frame though the palm and the hand seem masculine) perspective, once assuming that the hands slipped accidently and in another one presuming it was done deliberately. All true lovers or best couples would forgive me for two stanzas which they would anyway loathe-

The Girl 1-

You left my hand, how does rest matter,

Better leaving the world, such a debtor,

But don’t forget, don’t make it worse,

Please don’t inflict on others, this curse.

The Girl 2-

You gave your hand, with strength and grace,

Through all the trials, you kept your place,

Though fate may not have been kind,

Your love and trust, will always shine.

The Boy 1-

For long, unwillingly I held on that tight,

Afraid of what others might think and cite,

But now I’m free, and though it’s hard,

I’ll follow my heart, no longer on guard.

The Boy 2-

Luck snatched your hand, a twist of fate,

A million wishes, it’s now really too late,

But in this world or the next we’ll see,

Together again, just you and me.

Good evening and see you next time.

https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2023/04/24/what-do-you-see-183/,Β http://sundayswhirligig.blogspot.com/2023/04/whirligig-419.html

Published by J M Negi

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14 thoughts on “Hypothetically Yours

  1. These all are excellent JM. Love both the angles and the sentiments expressed are moving and genuine. Thanks for joining in.

  2. Thanks for the email. I couldn’t follow your directions on the phone so went to the desktop and am making this comment to follow you. Usually there is a little button on the lower right but not on your blog. Or at least I can’t find it. Anyhow…

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