( Written for Whimsygizmo’s d’Verse Quadrille #182: are you pining poetry?)
To opine on pine,
juggled with words which rhyme,
nothing to thought’s design,
if thought right, words weren’t fine,
words clicked, theme not sublime,
lesson before I did decline,
poems from heart not mind,
mind is subtle, heart decodes lines
as human and intertwines.
Good evening and see you next time.
Prompt guidelines- It’s Quadrille Monday here at dVerse (my favorite!), when we pen poems of exactly 44 words, including one word we here at dVerse provide. Today, I want you to pine away.
I am still dreaming of the pine forests of Oregon, after being home again for a month. Won’t you join me in…
Getting lost among the pine trees. Pondering the scalloped intricacies of a pinecone. Biting into the sacred sweetness of a pineapple. Pining away over a lost love. Use pine as a noun, verb, or adjective. Or play around with it and invent your own word.
I also love these pine poems:
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/51099/pine
And more here:
Well done! Loved it. ❤
Sincere thanks always.
Beautiful take b
Sincere thanks always.
My pleasure
“heart decodes lines
as human and intertwines”
A brilliantly true line ❤️
Sincere thanks always
“heart decodes lines
as human and intertwines.”
lovely as always ✨🤍✨
Sincere thanks always.
my pleasure always J 🤍
Such fun rhyme here! Loved it!
Sincere thanks.