Quietly Yours

Not a “revelation” when I say-

Better than my daughter saying with command “My father”,

Your simple nod for something I don’t ask,

Better than my wishes coming true,

Your denial to what I meekly ask for.

No lesser You coming across to my life,

Than my mother giving me birth,

No lesser my desire to like you,

Than the birth of my kiddies.

Better than me getting a treasure,

You making me wait for your false promise,

Better than time to get in Heaven,

Moments of our cries and tears together.


Good Morning and see you next time.

Written for: Eugenia’s Moonwashed Weekly Prompt #128 – 1/31/2023 – “Revelation”

Published by J M Negi

No experience only flair

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