( Written for W3 Prompt #85: Wea’ve Written Weekly )
prosaic my words, so vagrant was the soul,
before I met you, me but not me the whole..
you rendered thoughts in my heart’s geometry,
soul became musical and breath with poetry.
charming is life, hopeful looks the world now,
changed looks he, me, and them all somehow..
Love saves, paves, let it be around, abundant,
spread it to stop the world from being repugnant.
Good evening and till later….
Guidelines-
ladysigh’s prompt guidelines
Compose two verses according to the following specifications:
- “Opposites”: The first and last word of each stanza must be opposites of one another;
- The two stanzas must use different opposites.
- No restrictions on form, length, meter, or rhyme;
- Thematic: Write about emotions, attitudes, and/or moods;
- III. Submit: Click on ‘Mister Linky’ below
In order to participate and share a poem, open up this blog post, outside of the WordPress reader. At the bottom, just below these words, you will see a small rectangular graphic with the words ‘Mr Linky’. Click on that to submit.
Submissions are open for 5 days, until Monday, December 18, 10:00 AM (GMT+2)
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Sincere thanks. 💐💐
I really like this one.
My sincere thanks. 🙏🙏
A beautiful poem.
My sincerest thanks, Sadje ji.
You’re welcome
love the feeling of hope in your well strung poem J M❣️
Yes, we all must look for love and hope around us. My sincerest thanks, Cindy.💐
beautifully expressed, as always 🤍
My sincerest thanks, D…💐💐
I enjoyed this. We all need love.
Sure, we really do. Sincere thanks.
Very, very lovely, JM 🙂
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David
Sincerest thanks, David. 😊 💐 🙏
Hi, JM 👋🏻
This week’s W3, hosted by the wonderful and talented Reena Saxena, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/12/20/w3-prompt-86-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
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Beautiful thoughts, JM! ❤
Sincere thanks, Cheryl. Good day. 💐💐🙏🙏
Nice poem.
Sincere thanks, Verma ji.
So beautiful verses👌👌👌
My sincere thanks, KK Sahab.
I keep trying to comment on your poem and having difficulty. I’m not very good at figuring out WordPress. Thanks for participating in my Opposite poetry. I like your poem.
Hope my comment appears this time. 🙂
Yes, it did and I appreciate that too. My sincere thanks.
The first stanza is brilliant. Magic with words!
it’s really heartening to know that you liked it. My sincere thanks, Reena ji.
Hermoso 💕
Sincere thanks.
Love the feeling of hope 💕
My sincere thanks.