( Written for Reena’s Xploration Challenge #298 )
Better brittle than ductile and bent,
Better unfinished than without a dent,
Ages before getting this sharp edge,
Time gave lesson for truth and courage.
Better broken than being worn,
Better a message than noise weary or torn,
Got a numb soul and skin,
still, can Whirl a lull for the storm to spin.
Good afternoon and see you next time.
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Excellent last line.
My sincere thanks and regards.
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Beautiful!
Sincere thanks.
Profound truth in few words! I especially love the last two lines.
My sincere thanks and regards.
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My sincere thanks.
“Got a numb soul and skin,
still, can Whirl a lull for the storm to spin”
seems like an echo of your other comments but it is truly an intriguing thought to end.
nicely done as always 🤍
Thanks heartily always. 🙏🙏
pleasure, J 🤍🙏
Nice 😊
Sincere thanks.💐
Most welcome.
Thanks for sharing this idea. Anita
Great lines JM!❤️
My humble thanks with regards.
welcome😍