(Written for dVerse prompt: Quadrille #183, A Sliver of a Poem posted on 4 Sep 2023)
Though It’s made with much adroitness,
With cheese rich decoration and ambrosial taste,
Enough for human temptation,
But this is not why only a sliver of the cake
will do for me,
It’s the emotional aroma that plates any dish,
So delicious or gritty. (44 words)
Good afternoon and see you next time.
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Let Them Eat Cake! Quadrille #183, A Sliver of a Poem-
dVerse prompt: Quadrille #183, A Sliver of a Poem written in 44 words
The dVerse prompt hosted by Kim from Writing in North Norfolk, bringing you the Quadrille, when we take any meaning or form of one word and transform it into 44 poetic words. Today, she wants us to write a poem of exactly 44 words (not counting your title), including the word SLIVER.
Cheesecake—rich, creamy a simple pleasure of life divine ambrosia on a graham cracker crust temptation beckons only a sliver will do cut me off a slice of my guiltiest delight right now, the scale can wait tomorrow's another day today is all about cheesecake ©Colleen M. Chesebro
Oh yes, the aroma of cake! Nicely done!
Sincere thanks.
Wonderful take.
This line 👌❤
It’s the emotional aroma that plates any dish,
Sincere thanks always.
sweetly true
and beautifully done, J 🤍
Sincere thanks always.
Especially the aroma of a lemony cheese cake. ..and joy follows! A very perceptive line, ‘plated with emotion’.👏🏼👏🏼
My sincere thanks always.
I love when I can inspire anyone to write about sweets. Bravo! How lovely!
My sincere thanks and all the thanks that left unconveyed wrt my other response to the prompt.
We have to take care of each other is how I look at it. 💜
Yes, I agree. Thanks yet again.
This is such a yummy cheese cake.Anita
Sincere thanks.
A delicious poem.
Sincere thanks.
You’re welcome