( Written for W3 Prompt #69: Wea’ve Written Weekly posted on August 23, 2023 )
How long will the darkness last
only till we desire not to be lit in,
There is a crack, a crack in everything,
that’s how the light gets in
So we must look for a way to our soul,
for light to reach our conscience,
Ring the bells that still can ring,
forget your perfect offering
to enlighten your wisdom.
Good evening and see you next time.
Ange’s prompt guidelines
- Below are the first 14 lines of Leonard Cohen’s (1934 – 2016) ‘Anthem’;
- Select any two or three of Cohen’s lines from below and incorporate them into a poem of your own;
- You must: keep Cohen’s words in the original order, but you may change the punctuation;
- Your poem should be no less than five lines and no more than 20 lines.
- Select any two or three of Cohen’s lines from below and incorporate them into a poem of your own;
‘Anthem’ lyrics’
The birds they sang At the break of day Start again I heard them say Don't dwell on what has passed away Or what is yet to be Ah, the wars they will be fought again The holy dove, she will be caught again Bought and sold, and bought again The dove is never free Ring the bells that still can ring Forget your perfect offering There is a crack, a crack in everything That's how the light gets in
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Submissions are open for 5 days, until Monday, August 28, 10:00 AM (GMT+3)
excellent, J. M.
I’m glad you made it before the prompt closed! 😀
~David
Thanks truly.
hi, J. M. ❤
Just wanna let you know that this weeks W3, hosted by the lovely Elizabeth of ‘Tea and Paper’ is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/08/30/w3-prompt-70-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
Hi, J. M. 👋🏻
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the wonderful Willow, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/09/06/w3-prompt-71-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
So well done JM
Sincere thanks and regards.
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Great use of lines 🙌
Sincere thanks.
lovely as always, J.. 🤍
Sincere thanks always.
Thanks for sharing this idea. Anita
Sincere thanks.
JM this is good. Very good!
Sincere thanks.