Really Yours

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(Written for What do you see # 197- July 31, 2023 #Whatdoyousee #WDYS)

The Almighty has shown us all a door,

A door to happiness and, prosperity,

To good health, humanity & longevity,

We open the door and get the treasure,

We be oblivious and miss the pleasure,

Enjoy heaven and create hell for others,

Or open the door for all and be the savior,

It’s nature’s door, real heaven medium,

Not like unreal Sailing to Byzantium.

What do you see # 197- July 31, 2023

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18 thoughts on “Really Yours”

  6. This piece beautifully emphasizes the choices we make in life and the door to happiness and prosperity that lies before us. It urges us to be mindful of our actions and their impact on others, whether we create heaven or hell. The poem cleverly contrasts the real door of nature’s gifts with the metaphorical “unreal Sailing to Byzantium.” Thought-provoking and well-written!

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    1. My sincerest thanks and regards for the lovely words. Yes, you are right, we have to be equally cautious of our actions’ impact on other people’s happiness as we are for our own. Thanks truly.

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