Confessedly Yours

( Reena’s Xploration Challenge #289 Posted on July 20, 2023 by Reena Saxena- “Rain”)

Drench my eyes with remorse and repentance,

For all the things I should have done but I couldn’t,

How I wish it would rain down, down on me.

Do asperges on my soul for the deceits & betrayals,

That I did with other’s trust which I shouldn’t,

How I wish it would rain down, down on me.

Would bathe me O! Lord for true confessions,

On humane promises I ought to have kept but I couldn’t,

How I wish it would rain down, down on me.

Reena’s Xploration Challenge #289

Good evening and and see you next time.

Inspired by the great Phil Collins, my favorite, though theme and words are different altogether.

Guidelines- Welcome back to another week of incessant rains! Well, that is the weather in my part of the world.

Rains bring so much to mind – metaphorical, meteorological, geographical, poetic, natural beauty, floods. Prompt # 289- “Rain”

Let the thoughts flood your mind. You may use the word “rain’ in your piece in any form.

Alternatively, I found a picture which is experimental on Unsplash.

You may choose one or both as your muse this week.

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