Written for #Whatdoyousee 189 5/6/2023 Or #WDYS
Obscure palm lines whine,
Waters from eyes or heaven!
They came, nonetheless.
Good afternoon and see you next time.
with no commitments and all excuses
with no commitments and all excuses
Written for #Whatdoyousee 189 5/6/2023 Or #WDYS
Obscure palm lines whine,
Waters from eyes or heaven!
They came, nonetheless.
Good afternoon and see you next time.
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They come from eyes or the heavens. Beautifully written JM. Thanks for joining in.
Heartily thanks and regards pl.
My pleasure
“Obscure palm lines whine…”
for some reason, reminds me of Ghalibs sher on palm lines.
a profound take š¤āØ
Since palm lines metaphor luck, there are many shers and songs with those words for woes/distress/ agony. I would love to hear abt the one very specific. Thanks anyway.
you welcome š¤
does not necessarily match your thoughts. just one that Iāve always favored and havenāt thought of in a while. your poem reminded me of it. š¤
Hathon ki lakeeron pe mat ja Ghalib, naseeb unke bhi hote hain jin ke haath nahi hoteā¦
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This is an iconic one, and there are many like this one-
Kabhi main apne hathon ki
Lakeeron se nahi uljha
Mujhe maloom hai kismat ka
Likha bhi badalta hai. Basheer Badr….
Many hind movie songs also.
Thanks yet again.
‘waters from eyes or heaven’ beautiful š
Heartily thanks.
Making rivers of palm lines ā¤ļø a beautiful haiku
Thanks always.