Relaxingly Yours

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A Twin Haiku

 

 

 

 

 

Good – natured shadows,

Are brighter in life’s twilight,

Looks a warm morning.

Written for : Eugenia’s Moonwashed Weekly Prompt #144 – 5/23/23 – Good-natured

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Ruptured soul desires,

Words more written than uttered,

Poem, help me unwind.

Written for : David’s W3 Prompt #56: Wea’ve Written Weekly

 Suzette’s prompt guidelines 
Write: A) a Haiku, OR: B) a Tanka on the theme of “a favorite way to relax / unwind”

https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/05/24/w3-prompt-56-weave-written-weekly/

Good evening and see you next time. 

Published by J M Negi

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19 thoughts on “Relaxingly Yours”

  1. stunning and beautiful and so true…
    “Ruptured soul desires,
    Words more written than uttered…
    lovely as always, J 🤍

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  2. Sadje – I am writing to express my opinion, share my experiences and to maybe provide some insight. My blog is addressing women at 50 ( but men are welcome to read my posts) ,their issues and the questions that come up at this stage in life. I don’t aim to teach, but to learn together.
    Sadje says:

    So well done.

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      1. Sadje – I am writing to express my opinion, share my experiences and to maybe provide some insight. My blog is addressing women at 50 ( but men are welcome to read my posts) ,their issues and the questions that come up at this stage in life. I don’t aim to teach, but to learn together.
        Sadje says:

        You’re most welcome

      2. Sadje – I am writing to express my opinion, share my experiences and to maybe provide some insight. My blog is addressing women at 50 ( but men are welcome to read my posts) ,their issues and the questions that come up at this stage in life. I don’t aim to teach, but to learn together.
        Sadje says:

        My pleasure

  3. Eugi – Atlanta Ga – "Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words." - Robert Frost
    Eugi says:

    Both haiku are lovely!
    “Good – natured shadows,
    Are brighter in life’s twilight,
    Spot on, J M!

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      1. Eugi – Atlanta Ga – "Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words." - Robert Frost
        Eugi says:

        Most welcome.

  5. ben Alexander – David Bogomolny was born in Jerusalem to parents who made Aliyah from the USSR in the mid-70's. He grew up in America, and returned to Israel as an adult. He works as a grant writer for the Jewish Agency for Israel. He and his wife and daughter live in Jerusalem.
    ben Alexander says:

    J. M. <3 ~ wow!

    brighter in life’s twilight,

    that is such an interesting line…

    love it…

    ~David

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      1. ben Alexander – David Bogomolny was born in Jerusalem to parents who made Aliyah from the USSR in the mid-70's. He grew up in America, and returned to Israel as an adult. He works as a grant writer for the Jewish Agency for Israel. He and his wife and daughter live in Jerusalem.
        ben Alexander says:

        J. M.,

        Just FYI: this week’s W3 prompt, hosted by the wonderful Melissa Lemay, is now live (until Monday):

        https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/05/31/w3-prompt-57-weave-written-weekly/

        Enjoy! 🙂

        Much love,David

  7. roksanaamelia – An Ambivert An Artist: Love to read, write, paint, and travel. Love taking photographs as well. While I focus on imagining, knowing and divining, my core IKIGAI is to serve and smile. Gratitude: Thanks for checking out my blog. Feel free to knock me if you have anything to ask, have a read, leave a comment and/or follow me. Thank you once again😊
    roksanaamelia says:

    Lovely expression
    And so true…
    “Ruptured soul desires,
    Words more written than uttered…”
    Excellent

    Reply

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