Eternally Yours

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(Written for : David’s W3 Prompt #55: Wea’ve Written Weekly)

 

Tangled thoughts, how and when to embrace,

Restless mind, sporadic concerns, we chase,

Our desires, shared or left astray,

 Uncertain if they’ll bloom or simply decay,

Bursting with life, still we seldom dare to believe,

Leaving behind doubts, we yet choose,

Eternal journey this is; lonely we go……

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Punam’s prompt guidelines-
Write an acrostic poem on any one of the following words:
Discipline;
Enthusiasm;
Meditation;
Tumult;
Trouble.

https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/05/17/w3-prompt-55-weave-written-weekly/

I chose to pick the word “Trouble”

Good evening and see you next time.

Published by J M Negi

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23 thoughts on “Eternally Yours”

  2. Diti Sen – Kolkata, India – An independent writer and author, currently exploring blogging, tracking life from India and ready to explore anything from the tried and tested to the wierd and the eclectic. You will find, nature, travel, food, children, folklore, myths, festivals, reflections, inspirations, amongst many other topics here. Anything that makes me think and ponder and want to know more about.
    Diti Sen says:

    Very nice indeed. Novel approach.👍🏼

    Reply
  3. Sadje – I am writing to express my opinion, share my experiences and to maybe provide some insight. My blog is addressing women at 50 ( but men are welcome to read my posts) ,their issues and the questions that come up at this stage in life. I don’t aim to teach, but to learn together.
    Sadje says:

    Nicely done JM

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      1. Sadje – I am writing to express my opinion, share my experiences and to maybe provide some insight. My blog is addressing women at 50 ( but men are welcome to read my posts) ,their issues and the questions that come up at this stage in life. I don’t aim to teach, but to learn together.
        Sadje says:

        You’re most welcome

  5. ben Alexander – David Bogomolny was born in Jerusalem to parents who made Aliyah from the USSR in the mid-70's. He grew up in America, and returned to Israel as an adult. He works as a grant writer for the Jewish Agency for Israel. He and his wife and daughter live in Jerusalem.
    ben Alexander says:

    J. M. ~ WOW ~ that last line in particular is such a gut punch:

    Eternal journey this is; lonely we go……

    An excellent poem.
    Much love,
    David

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      1. ben Alexander – David Bogomolny was born in Jerusalem to parents who made Aliyah from the USSR in the mid-70's. He grew up in America, and returned to Israel as an adult. He works as a grant writer for the Jewish Agency for Israel. He and his wife and daughter live in Jerusalem.
        ben Alexander says:

        J. M. <3

        Just wanna let you know that this week's W3, hosted by the brilliant Suzette Benjamin is now live (it's up until Monday):

        https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/05/24/w3-prompt-56-weave-written-weekly/

        Enjoy!

        Much love,
        David

  7. poetisatinta – UK – I was born and live in rural North Wales (UK) and found poetry again after a lifetime, so grateful I did :)
    poetisatinta says:

    Beautifully done, especially the last line ❤️

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  8. Cindy Georgakas – I’ve been in the field of health and wellness for thirty plus years. It is my passion and life work. I’m a Life Coach, certified through Dr. Cherie Carter Scott PHD (Mother of Life Coaching), a Certified California Massage Therapist, (CAMTC) specializing in Craniosacral Therapy, Thai, Deep Tissue, Sports. Pre postnatal etc. I am also a Reiki Master, a Certified Personal Trainer, and a Certified Yoga Teacher and writer. I love starting my day in meditation, yoga and Tai Chi and Qui gong, hiking with my husband, furry legged kids, and my kids (when I can grab them); and hanging with my cats.
    Cindy Georgakas says:

    Well done!!

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      1. Cindy Georgakas – I’ve been in the field of health and wellness for thirty plus years. It is my passion and life work. I’m a Life Coach, certified through Dr. Cherie Carter Scott PHD (Mother of Life Coaching), a Certified California Massage Therapist, (CAMTC) specializing in Craniosacral Therapy, Thai, Deep Tissue, Sports. Pre postnatal etc. I am also a Reiki Master, a Certified Personal Trainer, and a Certified Yoga Teacher and writer. I love starting my day in meditation, yoga and Tai Chi and Qui gong, hiking with my husband, furry legged kids, and my kids (when I can grab them); and hanging with my cats.
        Cindy Georgakas says:

        It’s a pleasure JM💐

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