Affectionately Yours

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A place where you ain’t you, I ain’t me,

A space though small but with happiness,

Where you choose from the heap of desires,

You put the sorrows in the detritus,

Time not needed to heal wounds.

 

A place, I tell you nothing, you hear everything,

A space with dignity between us-no illusion,

Where customs to follow, but no hindrance,

You and I can laugh whole heartedly,

And tears taste only sweetness.

 

A place, You and I can embrace all others,

A space, nothing for us but all for all,

Where no discrimination-all affection,

You and I can live forever and never to leave,

Even tiny moments not for ages.

 

Written for dVerse Poetics: Poetry of Place and Space.

Good evening and see you next time.

Published by J M Negi

No experience only flair

30 thoughts on “Affectionately Yours

    1. Looking for one, that’s why I was late by a week on the prompt called”place and space”. Time- one week and I was sharp one week “late”😊

  1. people come and say man you are so on it to day
    i respond in kind i often find within the depths of my mind
    the nasty doubt of anything you might say
    lmao

  2. Aboli Mane – Poet. Writer. Blogger. I post short reads, and poetry on A Writer In The Room. I published my debut poetry book "An Aster's Solitude" in 2019. Currently: Keeping this blog afloat. I write flash fiction and poetry on various writing prompts.
    Aboli Mane says:

    Such a sweet poem ❤️

  3. Cheryl, Gulf Coast Poet – A retired teacher and mother of three adult children, I live on the Gulf Coast of Florida with my soulmate, Robert. Leisure activities include discussing current events with Robert, watching movies, and playing Scrbble. Robert usually wins! I also enjoy going to the beach and taking road trips with my daughters. One of our favorite pastimes is observing the wonderful wildlife that surrounds us. I keep busy writing poetry, and I would be delighted if you visited my website!
    Cheryl, Gulf Coast Poet says:

    A space for magic moments! Lovely poem! <3

  4. Shruti Arora – I am Shruti Arora- an engineering student, a Certified Creative Writing Specialist (CCWS), and a Certified Digital Content Writer (CDCW). I have completed my certification from Henry Harvin Education. I am an admirer of nature, a tale-teller, a poet and a content creator. Writing is my way to release stress and express what I feel. It builds my sense of worth. At last, I cannot predict life, but can write my version of it! I invite each of you to embark upon my writing journey!
    Shruti Arora says:

    Magical!!💫✨

  5. vermavkv – India – I am Vijay Kumar Verma, residing in Kolkata, the city of joy. I was a Banker since December 1985 and retired in April 2017 from State Bank of India. After serving the Bank for 32 years as an officer holding different assignments from time to time, now I am currently enjoying the retired life. I would like to fulfil the duty of social service through this platform spreading aware about the health related problems and their remedies. I will also try to entertain my followers through knowledgeable information and motivate them to enjoy better and quality lifestyle. It is my endeavour to keep the post friendly and as informative as I can. I am willing to connect with my friends and followers, through my stories and drawings out of my passion to write and make sketches. I would like to create a trusted and joyful friend circle, and share tales from the past
    vermavkv says:

    So beautiful.

  6. 100 Country Trek – Hello. Nice to meet you. My journey to cover as much of the world as possible began in Costa Rica in 2003. This is a story in itself, but for now I'll tell the short version . On a hike around Manuel Antonio I started chatting with a fellow hiker from Belgium. He told me he had a trip planned to visit Borneo within a few weeks of his return home. He then went on to say he had been to at least fifty different countries. That was when the travel bug bit me. I haven't stopped going since and the journey has been so incredible . It is here that I will share some of the incredible travel experiences .
    100 Country Trek says:

    Sounds like a magical place..thanks Anita

  7. Reaseaorg – Worcester UK – Smoothie, Cider, Film, Restaurant or other reviews every Friday. 300+ articles. Brands include Innocent, Westons, Inches, Thatchers and many more … Contact me : reaseaorg@gmail.com For author-read articles try our audio subscription for only 99p a month: https://anchor.fm/reaseaorg/subscribe
    Reaseaorg says:

    Wonderful words. I think the you ain’t you line really sings of mutual acceptance of change in relationships 🙂

      1. Reaseaorg – Worcester UK – Smoothie, Cider, Film, Restaurant or other reviews every Friday. 300+ articles. Brands include Innocent, Westons, Inches, Thatchers and many more … Contact me : reaseaorg@gmail.com For author-read articles try our audio subscription for only 99p a month: https://anchor.fm/reaseaorg/subscribe
        Reaseaorg says:

        Very welcome 🙂

  8. Dawn Minott – Poet. Blogger. Speaker. Author of “Moments: A Poetic Autobiography”. Unapologetically a lover of God, a lover of love and all things nature. Hardcore logophile with an epigrammatic style. Creative soul. Artsy to the core.
    Dawn Minott says:

    Sounds idyllic 👍🏽

  9. Priti – I, a teacher, dreamer, imaginative personality, feel life deeply and try to express it through my writing.
    Priti says:

    Beautiful lines! 👍

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