A place where you ain’t you, I ain’t me,
A space though small but with happiness,
Where you choose from the heap of desires,
You put the sorrows in the detritus,
Time not needed to heal wounds.
A place, I tell you nothing, you hear everything,
A space with dignity between us-no illusion,
Where customs to follow, but no hindrance,
You and I can laugh whole heartedly,
And tears taste only sweetness.
A place, You and I can embrace all others,
A space, nothing for us but all for all,
Where no discrimination-all affection,
You and I can live forever and never to leave,
Even tiny moments not for ages.
Written for dVerse Poetics: Poetry of Place and Space.
Good evening and see you next time.
sounds like a magical place 😁😋
so very tenderly described.
Lovely, J🤍
Looking for one, that’s why I was late by a week on the prompt called”place and space”. Time- one week and I was sharp one week “late”😊
aren’t we all😂
a delightful place across space, indeed ✨
Oh! yes, in fact we continuously are…Thanks again.
people come and say man you are so on it to day
i respond in kind i often find within the depths of my mind
the nasty doubt of anything you might say
lmao
Thanks yet again.
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Thanks, John.
Such a sweet poem ❤️
Sincere thanks pl.
Damn fine poetry 👍👏👏
Sincere thanks.
A space for magic moments! Lovely poem! <3
We all need such places all across the world, I fathom. Thanks a lot and regards.
Magical!!💫✨
I wish HIS magic works for all of us. Thanks.
So beautiful.
Thanks a lot for your kind words.
Sounds like a magical place..thanks Anita
Welcome and regards.
Wonderful words. I think the you ain’t you line really sings of mutual acceptance of change in relationships 🙂
Absolutely so! Sincere thanks.
Very welcome 🙂
Sounds idyllic 👍🏽
Sincere thanks
Beautiful lines! 👍
My sincere thanks pl.
Wonderful poem 😊
Sincere thanks pl.
You’re welcome 😊