Fatherly Yours

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Tickle after sobs and like smile after sorrow,

Win after a loss, like hope of bright morrow,

Like a big blessing, and a beautiful sparrow,

Like beam of rays in path so dark, thin & narrow.

Deep sense in numbness, relief in a pain,

Oasis in a mirage, water spring & a fountain,

Echo in the wilderness, life – song’s refrain,

Like tear in happiness, a “prize” so very insane.

Professor of discipline, friend of bad time,

Profound idol of my dreams, euphonious chime,

Prophet’s boon to me, like crystal of rime,

Proudest father of proud daughter of mine.

 for SoCS (Stream of Consciousness Saturday) “Prize” and

prompt – “word that starts with pro.”

Good evening and see you next time.

Published by J M Negi

No experience only flair

14 thoughts on “Fatherly Yours

  1. Aboli Mane – Poet. Writer. Blogger. I post short reads, and poetry on A Writer In The Room. I published my debut poetry book "An Aster's Solitude" in 2019. Currently: Keeping this blog afloat. I write flash fiction and poetry on various writing prompts.
    Aboli Mane says:

    Heartfelt 💖

  2. Every words depicts deep beautiful emotions
    Love it

  3. They certainly are a blessing and the bond between a father and daughter is so very special and treasured, and you’ve captured that so lovingly.

  4. 100 Country Trek – Hello. Nice to meet you. My journey to cover as much of the world as possible began in Costa Rica in 2003. This is a story in itself, but for now I'll tell the short version . On a hike around Manuel Antonio I started chatting with a fellow hiker from Belgium. He told me he had a trip planned to visit Borneo within a few weeks of his return home. He then went on to say he had been to at least fifty different countries. That was when the travel bug bit me. I haven't stopped going since and the journey has been so incredible . It is here that I will share some of the incredible travel experiences .
    100 Country Trek says:

    Thanks for sharing your emotions. Anita

      1. 100 Country Trek – Hello. Nice to meet you. My journey to cover as much of the world as possible began in Costa Rica in 2003. This is a story in itself, but for now I'll tell the short version . On a hike around Manuel Antonio I started chatting with a fellow hiker from Belgium. He told me he had a trip planned to visit Borneo within a few weeks of his return home. He then went on to say he had been to at least fifty different countries. That was when the travel bug bit me. I haven't stopped going since and the journey has been so incredible . It is here that I will share some of the incredible travel experiences .
        100 Country Trek says:

        Can you follow my blog. Let me know. Anita

      2. 100 Country Trek – Hello. Nice to meet you. My journey to cover as much of the world as possible began in Costa Rica in 2003. This is a story in itself, but for now I'll tell the short version . On a hike around Manuel Antonio I started chatting with a fellow hiker from Belgium. He told me he had a trip planned to visit Borneo within a few weeks of his return home. He then went on to say he had been to at least fifty different countries. That was when the travel bug bit me. I haven't stopped going since and the journey has been so incredible . It is here that I will share some of the incredible travel experiences .
        100 Country Trek says:

        Ok

  5. vermavkv – India – I am Vijay Kumar Verma, residing in Kolkata, the city of joy. I was a Banker since December 1985 and retired in April 2017 from State Bank of India. After serving the Bank for 32 years as an officer holding different assignments from time to time, now I am currently enjoying the retired life. I would like to fulfil the duty of social service through this platform spreading aware about the health related problems and their remedies. I will also try to entertain my followers through knowledgeable information and motivate them to enjoy better and quality lifestyle. It is my endeavour to keep the post friendly and as informative as I can. I am willing to connect with my friends and followers, through my stories and drawings out of my passion to write and make sketches. I would like to create a trusted and joyful friend circle, and share tales from the past
    vermavkv says:

    Very emotional.

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