Amusingly yours

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Sometimes, I really get amused as to how do the bloggers I have been following, persistently keep writing wonderful prose or poetry. It’s not a sheer exaggeration that most of the prose or poetry has been of such a wisdom or quality that I take more time in putting a “worthwhile comment” than writing a blog myself.

Under these extenuating circumstances, and notwithstanding the fact that I tend to comment on most of the good reads, I can not exonerate all the good posts from the charge of myself being non regular or very erratic in posting in my own blog.

Even this evening, with nothing of any use to share with you all, I have supposedly the last poem (rather a mere rhyme with no poetic content) up my sleeve written as a 19 year lad in my engineering college to impress some of my batchmates, and I am unscrupulous enough to share it with you with no hesitation at all with an honest and pious objective of continuity of blogs. On reading this, I equally welcome your growling, exasperation and scolding with open heart very amusingly, since I have always been “Satirically yours“. There it goes:-

Who is it that talks to me

When I am very lonely,

Who is it that comes to me

Through my dreams only,

O! unknown love of mine,

It’s you It’s you.

Who is it that I never met,

But can feel by touch,

Who is it that I haven’t seen,

But seems known so much,

O! Unseen love of mine,

It’s you It’s you.

Who is it that I looked for,

Through ages far and near,

Who is it that afflicts me,

Still remains my dear,

O! Unkind live of mine,

It’s you It’s you.

Good Evening, see you next time…

Published by J M Negi

No experience only flair

31 thoughts on “Amusingly yours

  1. A lovely flow of amazing thoughts J… And your comments are always welcome and so much appreciated. 🤍🤍Haha… I wish I could comment like you do😋

    1. Wow! Nice to be the one who gets more”likes” for his comments than his posts. Just kidding…
      Thanks D.. your words are as sweet as your poetry is.

  2. It is not, “mere rhyme without poetic content”, they are deep and poetic verses, which I have found very pleasant to read. Thanks for your writings.

  3. Eugi – Atlanta Ga – A gander at me – I enjoyed a dedicated career in the insurance industry for over 20 years being rewarded both professionally and personally. Now it’s time for me to follow my dreams by doing things I enjoy…spending time with family, learning, sharing, traveling, writing poetry, and encouraging others to pursue their goals. Welcome to my blog, Moonwashed Musings.
    Eugenia says:

    What a beautiful and heartfelt piece, JM! I enjoy your work immensely. ❤️

      1. Eugi – Atlanta Ga – A gander at me – I enjoyed a dedicated career in the insurance industry for over 20 years being rewarded both professionally and personally. Now it’s time for me to follow my dreams by doing things I enjoy…spending time with family, learning, sharing, traveling, writing poetry, and encouraging others to pursue their goals. Welcome to my blog, Moonwashed Musings.
        Eugenia says:

        You’re most welcome,

      2. sherazade – rome, italy – "So qual'è il prezzo per conoscerti, e anche se posso sembrare riluttante a investire tutto quel patrimonio in una persona sola, non sopporterei l'idea di morire con tutto quel patrimonio"
        sherazade says:

        You too! Hallo from Rome italy

  4. 100 Country Trek – Hello. Nice to meet you. My journey to cover as much of the world as possible began in Costa Rica in 2003. This is a story in itself, but for now I'll tell the short version . On a hike around Manuel Antonio I started chatting with a fellow hiker from Belgium. He told me he had a trip planned to visit Borneo within a few weeks of his return home. He then went on to say he had been to at least fifty different countries. That was when the travel bug bit me. I haven't stopped going since and the journey has been so incredible . It is here that I will share some of the incredible travel experiences .
    100 Country Trek says:

    Thanks for sharing this idea. Anita

  5. then hence the king of marigold
    is nicer than the duchess of kirkalde
    smiling and arrriving late.

  6. The poem is actually good! Especially from a 19 years old of the past. 🙂
    Also, don’t feel guilty about not posting enough. Quality always trumps quantity! 🙌

  7. sherazade – rome, italy – "So qual'è il prezzo per conoscerti, e anche se posso sembrare riluttante a investire tutto quel patrimonio in una persona sola, non sopporterei l'idea di morire con tutto quel patrimonio"
    sherazade says:

    Il blog è rimasto almeno per quella piccola cerchia che frequento un luogo dove stare piacevolmente senza mettersi in competizione. La vita quella che ci impegna è fuori quindi non è la continuità dello scrivere che conta. Non ci sono obblighi si prova un’immediata empatia per alcuni è semplice curiosità per altri e non è necessaria alcuna finzione sbagliano a mio avviso quelli che vanno in cerca di like.
    Buona serata 🌻🦋

    1. My humble and sincere thanks for your kind & motivating words. They mean a lot to me.
      Very Good day to you.💐

      1. sherazade – rome, italy – "So qual'è il prezzo per conoscerti, e anche se posso sembrare riluttante a investire tutto quel patrimonio in una persona sola, non sopporterei l'idea di morire con tutto quel patrimonio"
        sherazade says:

        🦋💚🌹

      2. sherazade – rome, italy – "So qual'è il prezzo per conoscerti, e anche se posso sembrare riluttante a investire tutto quel patrimonio in una persona sola, non sopporterei l'idea di morire con tutto quel patrimonio"
        sherazade says:

        My pleasure 🦋

  8. singhpiyush6089 – Lucknow UP India – Avid Reader, writer, Musician, learner ,Space enthusiast, big fan of Nolan and Dan Brown. I am just a tiny dot in the fabric of space and time.
    singhpiyush6089 says:

    Well written…you should keep writing whatever comes to your mind…i believe blogs should be raw , it makes you regular and confident

  9. Lovely! Can be made into a song!

  10. vermavkv – India – I am Vijay Kumar Verma, residing in Kolkata, the city of joy. I was a Banker since December 1985 and retired in April 2017 from State Bank of India. After serving the Bank for 32 years as an officer holding different assignments from time to time, now I am currently enjoying the retired life. I would like to fulfil the duty of social service through this platform spreading aware about the health related problems and their remedies. I will also try to entertain my followers through knowledgeable information and motivate them to enjoy better and quality lifestyle. It is my endeavour to keep the post friendly and as informative as I can. I am willing to connect with my friends and followers, through my stories and drawings out of my passion to write and make sketches. I would like to create a trusted and joyful friend circle, and share tales from the past
    vermavkv says:

    Very nice write-up.
    Keep going.

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